She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool, brisk swim. Which is the best revision of this sentence?

Respuesta :

She met her friends in the bottom floor of the hotel, the lobby, so they could head over to the pool for a cool, brisk swim.

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ANSWER: She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.

EXPLANATION: The sentence has only been re-framed and thus the answer has been formed. Revisions are generally done by repeating and rearranging the words in the sentence again and again.

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