The assignment requires a personal response, based on your perception and opinions of the book. As I don't have access to your thoughts, I can't respond to this assignment, but I'll show you how to respond.
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One part I would change in "A long walk to water" is the beginning of the story. While reading, I noticed that the scenario is described in little detail and in a very indifferent way. For this, it harms the reader's imagination and does not promote the creation of mental images, which situate the reader about the place where the story takes place and how this place impacts the characters and elements of the narrative.
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