Some things to note when making revisions are:
This refers to the arrangement of a text to show the improvements made by adding new information and removing redundant information for better understanding.
Hence, we can see that for example, your topic is about the general weather, you are expected to:
Please note that your question is incomplete so I gave you a general overview to help you get a better understanding of the concept.
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