Brainliest plus 100 points.
Draft Model
My relatives and I celebrate Thanksgiving as if it were a family reunion. Every member of my family attends. We all cook, eat, and spend time together.
1. How could sentences be shortened or rearranged to make them less formal?
2. What formal vocabulary could be removed? What everyday vocabulary
could be added?
3. What contractions could be added?
Now revise the draft by adding or changing details to make the voice more informal.