Answer: I was highly excited to move on with my life, but thoughts kept rambling within my mind; How may I support my family and me and my brother’s education?
For the first time in my life, I felt like a daughter again, someone who can sense her beloved family around her.
Explanation:
It’s all about punctuation. Read it out loud to yourself and ask if that’s how you’d say it in reality. (Like a period mark or a comma, it can have a large difference.)
(I also apologise if anything is wrong or off, but I hope this helps you. Good luck.)
