The red hawk flew down to the meadow and a mouse was not spared by him.

Which revision is the most concise way to write this sentence without losing important information?


A) The red hawk flew down to the meadow and a mouse was grabbed by him.


B)The red hawk swooped down to the meadow and grabbed a mouse.


C)The hawk who was red flew swooping toward the meadow.


D)The flying red hawk swooped, and the mouse couldn't get away from him in the meadow.

Respuesta :

b is your answer.

a) it doesn't make it concise.

c) leaves out the mouse.

d) makes it longer.

The revised sentence is 'The red hawk swooped down to the meadow and grabbed a mouse.'

Option B is the correct answer.

What is a sentence?

The sentence is the combined form of words that can be verbs, adverbs, nouns, etc. in one line which ends with a full stop.

In the given sentence, the word 'flew' represents the past tense of the word 'fly', and the closest word to it is swooped which means rapid movement in the air towards down. The word 'grabbed' means to catch which is closely resembling the word 'not spared'.

Therefore, the sentence is revised without losing its true meaning.

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