rewrite the paragraph in order to create a formal tone.
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Today, I went to a store to spend my money my dad gave me for my birthday. While I was shopping, the sales clerk ignored me, and made an assumption that I had no money. I then decided I would not spend my money at this store, and would spend it at Toys R Us.
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