I would appretate it if somebody would correct theses sentences PLZ !
1. "The image that I get when I think of Jay is when I think of him as a small child, when he could rattle off the names of nearly every species of whale known to man. (Context: A grandfather describes his grandson.)"

2. Only then did I realize how annoyed a cat must have got when it couldn’t catch the mouse, and eventually how happy a cat can get when the mouse dies without it trying. (Context: A mouse dies from fright under a couch while a mom, her son, and their cat try to coax it to come out.) plz some body correct the 2 sentences PLZ and TY!