Max is writing an informative text about adopting a dog. Read the following excerpt from his draft below.


When choosing a dog, it is important to take into account the characteristics of the breed. Australian cattle dogs are working dogs. They are smart and need a great deal of exercise and a job to do. Being left alone all day in a small apartment might not be the best lifestyle for them. A small apartment might be a good home for a small breed, like a Chihuahua or a Pug.


How can Max improve this paragraph?


A.

by adopting a more formal style

B.

by adding quotations from owners to support his ideas

C.

by using more exact words and subject-area vocabulary

D.

by adding transition phrases to show connections between ideas

(will get most brainly)