GamerGirl15 GamerGirl15

19-02-2019
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Please help, I know its kind of tedious but would someone be willing to read over my essay and give me any feedback on things I could add or change?

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iaford21914 iaford21914

26-02-2019

Hi gamergirl. I edited your essay and left some pointers for you in the attachment. Everything in bold you can delete and anything in parenthesis is what you should add in. I hope this helps let me know.

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