Day 1: Editing & Revising Name:
The Happiness Industry
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(1)Today, happiness is a multimillion- 1. What change should be made to
dollar
Industry. (2)
encourage us to track our emotional
Self-help books
temperitures
. (3) There are apps that fum
the effects of
certain foods and exercise on
our moods
into graphs
(4) This increased self-consciousness
about
happiness
occurs on an intemational
level too since
2003, the EU has measured
and compared the happiness of people in
its member states, a
barometer watched
eagerly by
politicians.
(5) The stakes are high. (6) You'd be
hard-
pressed to
find a book on happiness
that does not cite studies
showing that a
cheerful disposition
makes you Sive longer or
that people
who enjoy life are more
successful at work.
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Change Self-help to Self help
Change our to your
Change fempèritures to temperatures
No change is needed.
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to sentence 62
Change You'd to You're
Change book to books
No change is needed.
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