Could you please examine this and rewrite it so that there aren't so many (I)s in it? This is intended to be a cover letter, but I'm not sure whether I did it correctly or if it's any good.
My letter: I am writing to convey my significant interest in the post of international marketing manager now available at Target, Inc. Janna Smith, one of my colleagues, suggested that I approach you personally regarding this opportunity. I understand you are looking for a Target Sales Associate; therefore, I'm contacting you. After reviewing the position requirements, I believe that my qualifications and education are a great match and that I am an excellent fit for this role also; I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss this further with you.
My strengths include teamwork, leadership, responsibility, and organizational abilities. My ability to contribute to the structure and goals of a team makes me good at teamwork. I am an excellent leader because I respect others and receive respect in return. My work is more efficient and enjoyable due to my honesty and openness. Delegation is required for leadership—trusting their team to complete their tasks with excellent results in great morale and mutual respect, which is what I do. I'm also a responsible leader because I know how to respond to circumstances maturely and professionally while; also performing and completing the responsibilities assigned to me. As a responsible leader, I must; also adhere to a specific competency or rule. Besides my other abilities, I have organized skills as well. I thrive in this area because it allows me to create structure and order, increase productivity, and prioritize things that need to finish promptly. I can keep business organized, so you can spend less time looking for items and more time working on vital duties. Organizations may improve the flow of communication between themselves and their teams while also increasing team productivity, making me a better leader and responsible employee. I can also reorganize something to improve its functionality or develop a new idea that improves things.
